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imarkanx || istvan markan 🍁's avatar

Oh this is such a visual and aural delight. Very nice.

A burst of flavours in my imagination.

Alma M.'s avatar

Thank you Mark :)

Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

Greetings Alma, I love what you create in my mind with your line “Electric thoughts—currents becoming roads” a super poem! May all be well in your neighborhood 💛 Geraldine

Alma M.'s avatar

Thank you Geraldine, I’m glad it resonated with you. :)

Geraldine A. V. Hughes's avatar

You are welcome!

S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

So much yes!!! Beautifully written.

Alma M.'s avatar

Thanks Sylvia :)

Ninjastroni's avatar

That opening line is so crunchy! I can see a sea of glowing glass shards...an ocean made of shooting stars. Nicely done!